It's like stone
Being dead inside
There's only hard cold twisting
In the depths of my null
I feel like warmth is a stranger
Where bitterness resides
I can't stop wondering when
I'll believe in sunshine
Because right now
It's like being dead inside
I don't even want for the effort
Of breathing and speaking
Certainly not loving
You're making it hard to try
So right now
It's like a wrenching pain
A knife in my heart
Where dreams used to be
Because I think that we've found
Of our end
It's like being dead inside
Like having no tears to cry
I'm dead inside
wow, i know what you are talking about all too well... most people want criticism on their pieces, but yours flows well, gets what youre feeling across very accurately (im assuming anyway), its just really quite good.