Desolate

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Desolate

12/6-6/12

Desolate desert scorching sun

Un-granted hopes tiny pebbles

Oasis is distant will end troubles

Sand-storms stir mind’s garbage

Oh traveler the oasis is but mirage

All realize when they come of age

Whence ye came you know not well

Your final rest you cannot tell

Now I can hear a tinkling bell

Soon will change to Death’s knell

 

[ This is for my good unseen friend Chiranjeevi Gandikota

 

A hopeless humble contribution to Churning of the Mind]

Author's Notes/Comments: 

More rubbish !!!!!

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Daniel-59's picture

I'll just come out and say it

I'll just come out and say it . RUBBISH MY ASS !


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

Jesster's picture

I enjoyed the read. You are

I enjoyed the read. You are like me... thinking your own work rubbish. But it's not. We should stop self judgement. Don't you think?


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bishu's picture

My humblest thanks to you

dear Hopefulwoman for your kindness. There is no competition as such so who really cares for Judges Laughing I write for fun zatts all ... Best wishes. Take care Embarassed


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allets's picture

It Is Fun and Beautiful

And not rubbish. It is BISHUSPEAKART.