Oh wow this one is grand, short, sharp and snazzy. It says it like it is, like how we all act when we got somthing we want too much. Definate fav for me.
this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.
Oh wow this one is grand, short, sharp and snazzy. It says it like it is, like how we all act when we got somthing we want too much. Definate fav for me.
this is not the end, this is not the begining of the end, this is merely the end of the begining.
You asked for passion! I'd gladly give! :)
Good job! I'll be back for more!
Cletus Hardiman
CHardiman@Comcast.net
Your poem screams out in hunger,for passion!...I rathewr ewnjoyed it!
i like this
poem because
u express your
feelings about
love and romantic
good work on it .