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My Love
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From The Heart My Love
Your fiery emerald eyes
Sweep over me.
My heart responds with a skip.
I catch my breath
As you reach for me.
Pulling me close
to your center,
I sigh
The heat of desire
Courses through my veins,
Alerting all of my senses.
To your smell, taste, and touch.
My pulse races
as you gently
lift me into your arms.
I feel the heat of your body
And the rapid beat of your heart.
My mind, soul and body
are in another dimension
As we join,
sharing, passion love and life.
Our bodies become one
with this cylindrical
spinning, vortex.
I have never felt such love
as I do in your embrace.
I don’t want to move
Lest I break this spell.
Cause once I open my eyes,
This magic will vanish.
I want this embrace to last forever.
That is quite lovely many thankyou's love Shells xx
This caught me up in the words and carried me through to the end...I held my breath as I read...I know the feeling of not wanting to break the spell. I will try and visit again and look at your art as well.
Thank you
Debbie
The stanzas are too diverse and lack a common theme to pull them all together. Poetry should create a feeling, an atmosphere that the reader can share. your analogies are too literal and or too surreal to create that feeling that you are trying to convey.
This is a wonderful poem. Was was nice to read something like this that is not graphic, but just beautiful in discribing a little of what occurs when 2 people in love have such special moments together. I enjoyed it so much. I have read other works by this poet and she is very, very talented. I hope she enjoys mine even half as much as I do hers.
This poem was really powerful but it leaves the reader questioning whether its about sex or not.
beautiful, as love should be! May You find it with eyes open.
one love Corey & co