18 February 2007 - 7:50am — Bryan Adam Tomimbang (not verified)
This piece is very profound. The life of one lived by chance. The euphimistic portrayal of how, once we are given birth, we must pay back the debt by death in the end. And finally, how we must live and take risks no matter what the consequence in order to live; just like the slot machine. All this, this poem says it all... GREAT ANALOGY!!! GREAT PIECE!!! (^_^)
This piece is very profound. The life of one lived by chance. The euphimistic portrayal of how, once we are given birth, we must pay back the debt by death in the end. And finally, how we must live and take risks no matter what the consequence in order to live; just like the slot machine. All this, this poem says it all... GREAT ANALOGY!!! GREAT PIECE!!! (^_^)