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Hooves beat and wind flows;

Forest glides-rays of light shine.

I am nearly home

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My first haiku...I had to write it for a class.  But, I still like it.

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©20 June 2004 - 2:04am — animus
10 June 2005 - 5:26am — poetvg
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i love this piece

16 April 2005 - 5:59am — Ken Duncan (not verified)
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Favorite

21 September 2004 - 9:01am — Lori Moore (not verified)
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You captured the moment. Great job for a first attempt.

29 July 2004 - 5:13pm — Q Amidala (not verified)
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This poem makes me think of Enya, and I have no idea why. I really like it. I still have my first haiku from Mrs. Williams class, too... But I don't think I'll post it. It's a little on the dorky side.

19 July 2004 - 7:13pm — bluestar
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this what you should have ended with, "I am nearly home, but I'm in the bushes because my stupid horse likes to tear through the brush like a mad cow." But i know, it's a haiku

22 June 2004 - 12:35pm — Jillian Camtasia Carver (not verified)
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I love it! I haven't yet found home... But im dam glad someone did! This pome made m esmiela nd like you .. i lik eot smile or feel strong emotion.