Under Mars

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No need for looking at the telescope,

I have everything to look at while you're there.



No bed is more comfortable than your arms,

No moment feels more right than this.



Being under the planet Mars...

Being here with you.



Long days can pull us apart,

But the need of being under Mars is there.



Looking up and knowing we'll never see it again,

But we have each other to look at forever.



We are each other's stars,

And we are surrounded by the attention of Mars.



No attention will strain us,

The best attention we have is each other.



I love you.



Your love is bigger than the universe.



No view of any planet is more beautiful

than the moment of me and you.

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S74RW4RD's picture

This is one of the finest love poems I have read in a long time.


Starward

justin's picture

u know im no good at critiqueing these things and this one is hard cause i know its not about me, but i love this poem