YOUR EARTHLY TRANCE

YOUR EARTHLY TRANCE

TOO MANY CHOICES

SO MANY VOICES

WANTING TO BE HEARD

IS THAT SO ABSURD

TRYING TO GET THROUGH

TO MAKE SENSE TO YOU

MESSAGES ARE THERE

IF YOU DARE TO SHARE

JUST BECAUSE YOU CARE

TRY TO BE AWARE

GIVE THEM ALL A CHANCE

TAKE A SECOND GLANCE

KNOWLEDGE MAY ADVANCE

AND IT WILL ENHANCE

YOUR EARTHLY TRANCE

 

 

IF YOU'RE PERCEPTIVE

OF DIFFERENT PERSPECTIVE

 IN BETWEEN THE LINES

OF MANY DIFFERENT TIMES

THERE IS SO MUCH TO FIND

 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

THIS ORIGINALLY ENDED WITH YOUR EARTHLY TRANCE AND I LIKED THAT BUT THEN THE LAST FIVE LINES CAME ALONG ALMOST AS AN AFTERTHOUGHT SO I SEPARATED THE AFTERTHOUGHT FROM THE ORIGINAL POEM AS AN AFTERTHOUGHT...IT MIGHT HAVE BEEN IN THE AUTHORS COMMENTS SECTION HERE BUT DECIDED TO MAKE IT A TAG ALONG PART OF THE POEM TO BE READ AFTER A PAUSE FROM THE MAIN POEM...THIS STUFF HAS A MIND OF ITS OWN HONESTLY...

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