This is my first time ever writing a poem. It is for a girl i care about/really like. We've been dating for some time now and she is about to move 8+ hours away after college. Its really short and not anything special but just looking for some thoughts on it. I'm hoping to give it to her with her v-day presents so any feedback would be nice. Again its really short and I'm not a poet, just trying to make someone smile.
And yes I stole a line from lil Wayne lol