Alright, this poem is a little different from the other poems in this folder. It is about a few friends of mine, each a big part of my life and each with something else going on. It is allso about my Christian Renaissance that i am going through because of some of it. The best part is, it isn't finished yet...
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Edited once lines 37-68: here i express my oppinions on offering advice, first in saying i offer it wheater or not it's taken and after that how it is my duty and wanted obligation. I smell 32 more lines coming, so keep up
Clay
Final Edition, lines 69-100: Here I finish about my wanted obligation and go on to when it's too much and when i need to get away. The final part shows what it all comes down to, the power behind everything, every gift, every burdon, every turn and every charted path, God.
