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In this poem a dead person is talking, he is showing how it feels when entering the grave, and the things he was thinking of.  I wrote this poem because I wanted to express my feelings and ideas of how a dead person may feel while entering and how they might think.  It also shows that I always think about death and when it may come to me, and I want to be prepared for it when it comes by collecting ideas on how it may be.

rhyme scheme: ABAB

In this poem a mother of two babies that died is talking.  She is at first talking about the lighten candle and then thinking why her kids stopped crawl from their cradle to her bed when the candle was turned off.  She was also talking about them, like why their crystal smile doesn’t change and why their eyelashes don’t move, and it turns out to be that it is a picture of them before they died.  In this poem, I wanted to have the feelings that a mother with lost kids may feel, and so I did and I expressed it my own way.  

Ton,ton you are my angel.

i was very depressed after my son died, so i set down to write and this was how i felt.

I absolutely love this poem. Studied it in school and it actually made the whole class cry.
Some IDIOTS think that I'm claiming to have written this poem myself. I am not claiming that. Hence the author's name being at the end of the poem. Thank you please.
"He was my North, my South, my East and West,"

Heartbreaking.

" jesus and momma will always love me"

I wrote this poem from my son austins point of veiw about losing his little brother