Please critique this poem.
Dedicated to Theresa, who tried to take my smile and failed, and to my friends, who gave it back with interest. For anyone who knows what it's like to hate yourself.
1/15/01
I wrote this to my ex and never sent it...you can guess the realtionship sucked.
** الكاب: جنوب افريقيا حيث سجن منديلا
الإمرالي: سجن اوجلان
بساتيل فرنسا: سجن كارلوس
الخيام: المعتقل المشهور في جنوب لبنان
الجفر: السجن المشهور في الصحراء الأردنية
key iam not done i need a bit of help so tell me what you like and dont
