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Starward commented on: Yearning human heart by Pungus 3 years 36 weeks ago
I just had to visit this: I just had to visit this magnificent poem again.  It resonates so deeply, and raises such echoes of other poems that I have read in the decades since I began reading poetry, that I am almost overwhelmed by admiration, nostalgia, and a sense that I will be visiting this poem again and again.  Few poems strike me this deeply, but this one did!
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Starward commented on: a poet's tears by redbrick 3 years 36 weeks ago
For decades I have loved: For decades I have loved poems that are about writing poetry---like many of Wallace Stevens'.  The virginal leaves of the ninth line echoes and allude to the "leaf" simile in Homer's Iliad and John Milton's Paradise Lost.  This poem demonstrates your customary verbal elegance.
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crypticbard commented on: Licking the Battery by Callis.at.the.Palace 3 years 36 weeks ago
9 volt battery, will just do: 9 volt battery, will just do that trick.
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Thana-Darwish commented on: حرّية by Thanaa_Darwish 3 years 36 weeks ago
Love: Thank you my dear You are very nice   Love u
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crypticbard commented on: Life is... by Urban 3 years 36 weeks ago
Bright, rhyming and benign. A: Bright, rhyming and benign. A gentle and uplifting read. Thanks for sharing.
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crypticbard commented on: Remedy by Urban 3 years 36 weeks ago
The best medicine it has been: The best medicine it has been said oft enough. Thanks for sharing.
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crypticbard commented on: a poet's tears by redbrick 3 years 36 weeks ago
Thank you most kindly,: Thank you most kindly, Patricia. You are much appreciated. /Rik.
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Starward commented on: Scorched porch by Pungus 3 years 36 weeks ago
Patricia has described the: Patricia has described the poem so well that the only thing I can add is that I agreed wholeheartedly with her remarks.  This is an excellent poem.  Your skill with compression is perfectly deployed here, but the depth of the tale it presents is profound.
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patriciajj commented on: Scorched porch by Pungus 3 years 36 weeks ago
Sharply-etched and highly: Sharply-etched and highly symbolic imagery tells a story of desperation and self-destruction. Your haunting images blaze in my imagination as I connect with the experience. Small poem. Massive journey.    Excellent. 
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Starward commented on: Trump is the word by Teytonon 3 years 36 weeks ago
Although this poem may be: Although this poem may be criticized by one of the trumpsters (mine have), it presents a foundational truth that is being confirmed by the televised hearings:  the Innkeeper simply cannot accept that he was fired by the electorate.      This poem is more than a "great write" (if I may borrow the phrase):  it is also an excellent poem.
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Starward commented on: Yearning human heart by Pungus 3 years 36 weeks ago
The flowing lines, the: The flowing lines, the exquisite imagery, and the emotion conveyed by the words combine to make this poem a tremendous and excellent reading experience; and, in my opinion, this is the best of your best poems.  I am so very impressed with this one.
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Starward commented on: Yearning human heart by Pungus 3 years 36 weeks ago
I totally agree with your: I totally agree with your comment.  This is a MAGNIFICENT poem.
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georgeschaefer commented on: Yearning human heart by Pungus 3 years 37 weeks ago
really well written poem: really well written poem
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patriciajj commented on: Bread & Circus by Spinoza 3 years 37 weeks ago
Very relevant and striking: Very relevant and striking commentary on something that has been causing me great apprehension. I wish more people could see the gathering storm. Skillfully composed. 
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patriciajj commented on: God Send Rain Now by saiom 3 years 37 weeks ago
Joining you in this very: Joining you in this very important prayer. Hope you are well. 
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