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Starward commented on: Footnote: Autumn, 1977 by J4nu4r14n 3 years 36 weeks ago
Thank you.  That and 1981's: Thank you.  That and 1981's were the two most horrific autumns of my life, and they still haunt me to this day---even to still having nightmares from time to time.  But thanks for reading and commenting.
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crypticbard commented on: Footnote: Autumn, 1977 by J4nu4r14n 3 years 36 weeks ago
With the falling of the: With the falling of the leaves comes that feeling of connections, not so much intimacy but its infrastructure breaking apart and landing where proximity won't allow. The separate paths thus continuing on in the succeeding cycles of being, another Spring but the same old feeling. Too poignant to describe. Thanks for having shared.
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crypticbard commented on: HANG IN THERE by mil57man 3 years 36 weeks ago
And try prayer! and equating: And try prayer! and equating that to the must of hanging in there. Thanks for sharing.
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Starward commented on: Brutal Romance edit by SSmoothie 3 years 36 weeks ago
The power of the words you: The power of the words you have chosen, and how you have deployed them, radiaties off the page to a tremendous reading experience.
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SSmoothie commented on: Once bethought by Pungus 3 years 36 weeks ago
Yeah, sometimes I cringe at: Yeah, sometimes I cringe at reading my old poems, sometimes I marvel... that's the way of the game.   
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georgeschaefer commented on: PRETENDING I’M HUCK FINN by georgeschaefer 3 years 36 weeks ago
Neil Peart was a brilliant: Neil Peart was a brilliant poet/lyricist
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Starward commented on: Keeping hope alive by Teytonon 3 years 36 weeks ago
EXCELLENT: EXCELLENT COMMENTARY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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djtj commented on: Glistening in the Dark by patriciajj 3 years 36 weeks ago
Wonderful : Wonderful turn of phrases. I must come back and read the comments but suffice to say I enjoyed reading this. Have a wibder day  Debbie 
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crypticbard commented on: THOUGHTS OF GRANDEUR by georgeschaefer 3 years 36 weeks ago
It would seem that gone are: It would seem that gone are the days of an honest day's work. It was almost impossible to get ahead that way and now it's getting impossible to simply get by.
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crypticbard commented on: PRETENDING I’M HUCK FINN by georgeschaefer 3 years 36 weeks ago
Oh, right: and the space he invades he gets by on you
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georgeschaefer commented on: PRETENDING I’M HUCK FINN by georgeschaefer 3 years 36 weeks ago
It was a reference to a Rush: It was a reference to a Rush song from 1981.  I suppose there are still a few pre-baby boomers out there that might be too old for the reference.
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crypticbard commented on: PRETENDING I’M HUCK FINN by georgeschaefer 3 years 36 weeks ago
or too old... the urban: or too old... the urban dictionary ain't helpin much... perhaps the meaning lies with the poet in cases like this.
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sweetwater commented on: A Summer Afternoon. by sweetwater 3 years 36 weeks ago
Thank you Wordman, wouldn’t: Thank you Wordman, wouldn’t mind an ice cold lemonade :-) I’m very pleased you liked it, Sue.  
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crypticbard commented on: PLAYING HOOKIE by georgeschaefer 3 years 36 weeks ago
Everyone loves the occasional: Everyone loves the occasional hookie. We we come from, it can be called a sickie, a bit more complex -taking sicking leave days. Some bosses ask for a doctor's certificate. lol. Anything, really, to make a long weekend. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.
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georgeschaefer commented on: PRETENDING I’M HUCK FINN by georgeschaefer 3 years 36 weeks ago
Today's Tom Sawyer gets high: Today's Tom Sawyer gets high on you or maybe you're too young to get that reference
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