the fall

 

the f

        a

            l

               l 

 

it’s

 

the fight of your life

 

and

 

you know it’s

 

life or death

 

this time

 

survival of the

 

mis-fittest

 

all the world’s an

 

arena


your fate hangs


on the turn of a thumb

 

the gladiator bows

 

but Caesar isn’t looking

 

the

 

great blind fool

 

oblivious

 

to the hours of training

 

the cuts and bruises

 

the holds, punches and counter

 

punches

 

every sparring match

 

deathly serious

 

leading

 

inevitably to this

 

con-frontation

 

still

 

training all the

 

muscles

 

except

 

the one

 

most important

 

beating still

 

somewhere deep with-in

 

somehow

 

you’ve always known

 

he who would learn to fight

 

must learn how to

 

fall

 

 

 

all the great battles

 

and all the great

 

warriors

 

end this way

 

here’s hoping-humpty-dumpty

 

that patron saint

 

of all things

 

o-k

r        e

b               n -

 

may he bring peace

 

of mind

 

before the body

 

like bread

 

is broken

 

for a war that

 

already has been

 

won

 

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

For Thor Arne

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If caesar ain't looking, what

If caesar ain't looking, what even is the point? And if Humpty is the patron saint of all the broken then we have so much to look forward to! Wonderful piece of satire. Thanks for sharing. /Rik.


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Thanks!

Hey, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem! I've been browsing your works looking for a springboard into your work and mind. You right well and have a cohen like quality to your work which is kind of opaque, but which ar the same time leaves you wanting to know more about the mind and the experience(s) behind the poetry.  I stumbled over "cannot, will not" and could really identify with the sentiments. I tried to reply directly in the poem but fot a message that I wasn't authorized. So, hope you get this reply.  I tried to reply directly in the poem but fot a message that I wasn't authorized. So, hope you get this reply. The reference to writing to someone long dead gave me an association to this text by the Indigo Girls who do the same thing to Virginia Wolf.  I think you might like it. The only problem is that they write so fucking well that one is left to feel a little impoverished in comparison. Be well and vest of luck with your work. 

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It's so sad that there is

It's so sad that there is this no authorisation business as None of us, I don't think so, have any access or "buttons" to do that. 


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S'Been a while

Welcome back

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