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crypticbard commented on: Hansel by lyrycsyntyme 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Mysteriously dark. I had a: Mysteriously dark. I had a rather random thought of the two visiting a tanning salon. But this is far too graphic about incineration and cremation. And due deference is given to the witch and her malevolence, no flippancy there either. I can see a Pixar short as well in my mind's filming eye. Thanks for sharing. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Oblivious to Insult by lyrycsyntyme 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Felines are such mysterious: Felines are such mysterious creatures whose adorability is of another order. Thanks for sharing! [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Drowning by catclo15 3 years 24 weeks* ago* When hands don't reach out,: When hands don't reach out, be your own savior. You'll escape the water. Someone will be waiting with a towel. All the best. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: What you left me when you left me behind by ewbonitz 3 years 24 weeks* ago* I feel it, and I'm sorry: Feelings of a large room, and a heavy vacuum pushing across the expansive floor. Not a small person in your suffering, though. It's not possible to avoid filling the void with sadness and mourning, even if the sun unsympathetically carries on. The days must be counted, I suppose, till the next phase of life begins. All the best to you. This was really beautiful, no matter how sad. You do love justice. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: QE2 by Teytonon 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Forgive me, but, ding dong,: Forgive me, but, ding dong, the witch is dead. People who make their life upon claims that their bloodline allows them to drink off the backs of the masses are the truest of Welfare Queens. I wish not death upon anyone, but hopefully she gets a second chance to do it right (perhaps in pauper's clothes, next time). That all said, a nice rhyming scheme, sir, poetically. And your solid use of allusion at the start cued me into what event had transpired, even though I haven't watched, listened to or read the news in about 3 months. Skillful penning! [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: ONE LESS CHORE by georgeschaefer 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Just make sure to lock the: Just make sure to lock the door thereafter, lest the trash be dragged back in by the rats : ) [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: ode to wright by redbrick 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Thank you.: Thank you. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: ode to wright by redbrick 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Excellent!!!!!: Excellent!!!!! [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: NO REAL POET by georgeschaefer 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Neither should we let go.: Neither should we let go. Dreams that are birthed in the innocence of youth are the ones that seem to last a lifetime. Often they guide us in our days. Thanks for sharing. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: MAchine by captain 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Going on a dozen years ago,: Going on a dozen years ago, surely there is much more of this where it came from. Hope the pen's up and about although there aren't any other posts since this. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: non-elegy by redbrick 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Thank you most kindly. Very: Thank you most kindly. Very few have in public office exemplified her majesty's mien and dedication, the dignity with which she managed her almost impossible situation is something to be emulated and constantly be in awe of. Thanks again. [ go to comment ]
life_used_to_be... commented on: Sappy by Incompl 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Short but directly to the: Short but directly to the point. Sometimes less is more. Great write [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: non-elegy by redbrick 3 years 24 weeks* ago* The quiet dignity of this: The quiet dignity of this poem is wholly appropriate to its subject. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: to a Wittenberg Poet by redbrick 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Yes, Poetry is the connective: Yes, Poetry is the connective tissues between the souls of Poets and their readers. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Better Beings by Psysped 3 years 24 weeks* ago* A very enjoyable read in: A very enjoyable read in terms of of the word arrangements on the lines. [ go to comment ]