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lyrycsyntyme commented on: CLEAR AS MUD SAID ENOUGH by pamschwetz 3 years 23 weeks* ago* Kurt Cobain might try to come: Kurt Cobain might try to come back from the dead to sing this ; ) [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Poem to end all poems by Unseen.warfare 3 years 23 weeks* ago* Jesus was a know-it-all who protested war: Just a side note. Mainly, I want to say that when you find good medicine in life, keep taking it. It sounds like you have found your good medicine, your well-lit passage through the woods, half way through a feverish, winding search over unforgiving terrain. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Men by rachel 3 years 23 weeks* ago* Superb and enlightened: Superb and enlightened commentary on the harmful social conditioning men experience from birth. I was particularly charmed by your humanitarian candor, eloquence and insight in these words: "Oh I wish I could give all those young boys flower crowns Oh that I could teach them to be sweet to each other And that tears aren't just for girls" A crucial message, skillfully penned. Kudos! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: would be people's queen by redbrick 3 years 23 weeks* ago* I'm assuming this very: I'm assuming this very stirring and gorgeously composed tribute is for Dianna who would have made the finest queen. Her compassion, fearless activism and egalitarian vision would have been a much-needed inspiration, not only in the UK, but the world. Your elegant words are a worthy monument to the better world that could have been. Achingly beautiful. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Oblivious to Insult by lyrycsyntyme 3 years 23 weeks* ago* Thank you for your remarks: Feilnes carry their mysteries, indeed. And, while, as a species we've made many missteps, one of our good choices was to bring them into our shelters. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Oblivious to Insult by lyrycsyntyme 3 years 23 weeks* ago* Thank you.: And yes, especially with Bobbi (the muse, here). But cats, in general, do seem to forgive slight very quickly. Subsequently, as I look at my two snoozing cats now, I also realize that they don't lose a whole of sleep over life's ups and downs, either. Hm. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: The hippie hallucinatory by Pungus 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Having grown up in the haze: Having grown up in the haze of the 'hippie hallucinatory' reading this brings back kaleidoscopic memories, having been a bit young to participate was an almost silent witness to all the goings on. Succeeding generations would have thaie own psychedelia but nothing compares to the madness of the pioneers. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: My Socks Are Tight by williamjroneyiii 3 years 24 weeks* ago* I want to thank the Poets: I want to thank the Poets William J Roney III and Teytonon for giving demonstration that socks are an appropriate subject for poetry. [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: My Socks Are Tight by williamjroneyiii 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Re: Your tight socks: Your toes hurt, your socks are tight Sorry you're not feeling right Hope this won't be a surprise Socks, they come in different size Your socks are tight, here's what to do Buy XL, should be good for you That's what I wanted to mention Thanks so much for your attention [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Footnote: Three Tanka [ /;\ ] by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 24 weeks* ago* Thank you very much for that: Thank you very much for that comment. Akthugh I have not posted many Tanka sequences, I am always a little nervous that the interlinkage eliminates the stand-alone aspect. But your comment---coming from a Poet of your ever rising stature---eliminates the question on this sequence. And for that, I am most grateful. And I thank you for understanding, as you always do, the effect that the poem is trying to create or present. And this is not just academic understanding; it is a nurturer and a sustainer, so that this series of poems can continue to thrive. And, for that, I do not have enough words of gratitude to offer you. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Footnote: Three Tanka [ /;\ ] by S74rw4rd-13d 3 years 24 weeks* ago* These three tanka could each: These three tanka could each stand alone, yet they fuse seamlessly together into a garden of physical, spiritual and earthly delights. Nature is the thread that weaves sensuality and magnificence together. For instance, the cherry blossoms give a foretaste of a similar softness of the socks and their nuanced seduction; warm rain, a thin veil of moisture, awakens something primal in the observer in the second poem; the clouds and sun are vessels for the fully-blossomed love that drenches all creation in the third, forming a resplendent finale to the collection. An alluring trio. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: The Death of Queen Elizabeth II by randyjohnson 3 years 24 weeks* ago* I was wondering if and when: I was wondering if and when this would post, and it bears your inimitable signature style. [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: NO REAL POET by georgeschaefer 3 years 24 weeks* ago* we continue chasing the: we continue chasing the dragon known as the promise of youth [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Silver hooks by Pungus 3 years 24 weeks* ago* You set a sumptuous and: You set a sumptuous and intriguing stage. I would love to see where this goes! Something wonderful is certainly waiting to happen behind those "silken tapestry curtains" amid the "calm rhythmic clacking" in this mysterious place. Great possibilities! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Oblivious to Insult by lyrycsyntyme 3 years 24 weeks* ago* So clever! I adore the way: So clever! I adore the way you illustrated how much we "furless primates" can learn from these regal beings. A charming and very valuable life lesson. [ go to comment ]