PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

Thank you so much for your: Thank you so much for your comment on this one.  The original was flawed with a stupid typographical error, an omission that made the poem entirely different.  I was shocked, this afternoon, to discover what a poor proofreader I really am, and it gets worse as I age.  But thanks for visiting and commenting on the corrected version.

A witty and delightfully: A witty and delightfully unapologetic answer to a familiar complication in relationships. A pleasure to read, brilliant wordsmith!    

I applaud your assessment and: I applaud your assessment and interpretation.

It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/L2fgaPC_C7A

I must disagree with..: I must disagree with your self-assessment. I would say you're very strong. I'll tell you why. You've placed this poem in a folder you call 'Dark and Moody'. You could have called it 'Mark and Doody'. Rather than go for the cheap laugh and saying something a five year old would find amusing, you stuck to your guns and named it what you felt was more appropriate to the subject at hand. Bravo!

Nicely done: Very creative.  I had the melody of the song in my head the whole time I was reading it. Nicely done.