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saiom commented on: Yikes by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
charming: charming
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saiom commented on: You as Prairie. Me as Grass. by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
reaction:   your amazing mind.. known only to you and imho God
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saiom commented on: Pink Milk by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
reaction:    2 brothers i knew lived together for most of 30 years.. when the older one moved into a home with his girlfriend, the younger brother killed himself.. and the older, feeling guilt, followed his example
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saiom commented on: The Futility of Solitude by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
  yet another sad poem... 'A:   yet another sad poem... 'A retired piano,left to November,'  beautiful
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saiom commented on: Monuments by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
sad:   sad   infinite varieties of suffering on our planet  
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saiom commented on: Another One of My Luckier Days by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
  I was preparing a breakfast:   I was preparing a breakfast of eggs for my husband and children.. suddenly I saw the skillet full of blood, beaks, feathers.. the eggs had been fertilized and were almost chicks.. It was the last time I was involved with them
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saiom commented on: Post-it For Alice (ABC Poem) by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
response:   Because of your poem I discovered that Jackman (Hugh) is a veg.. who wants to be vegan but has not given up eggs
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eltrue commented on: Out Of Time by eltrue 2 years 33 weeks ago
Peculiar: I thought I would correct my title spelling lol!
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eltrue commented on: Out Of Time by eltrue 2 years 33 weeks ago
Paculiar : It's funny how people perceive things in their own mind. This particular work was published several times received some accolades but yet through this list of my stuff there's not a single comment on it. I find that extremely interesting and challenging in some sort of a way! But I love all the comments I have received on other works!
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saiom commented on: Trout Face Soup by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
reaction: i guess the fish i've seend on a hook don't have happy faces but panicked ones gasping for breath... you are more effective than i.. with your sense of humor
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saiom commented on: A History of Potato Salad by owlcrkbrg 2 years 33 weeks ago
ima: I wonder if Ima Bovine has met Howard Lyman, the 4th generation Montana cattle rancher who became vegan after promising God he would if his bone cancer was healed   God heal your physical problems  
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georgeschaefer commented on: TWO HEARTS by georgeschaefer 2 years 33 weeks ago
I do like to sleep: I do like to sleep
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georgeschaefer commented on: ELECTRIC WITCH by georgeschaefer 2 years 33 weeks ago
I'll share one with you one: I'll share one with you one day--if it lasts  
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georgeschaefer commented on: WICCAN WITCH by georgeschaefer 2 years 33 weeks ago
would they could cast a spell: would they could cast a spell on my heart
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Starward commented on: The Totality of You by patriciajj 2 years 33 weeks ago
Thank you for the reply.  As: Thank you for the reply.  As for the dwitching viewpoints, I think it only becomes confusing when one enters the third person mode from either the first or second.  But to shuttle between first and second seems to me to be fully acceptible, and a shrewd poetic strategy which you have used to advantage in this poem. As for never forcing it, I cannot imagine that you would ever insult your art, and your profound verbal abilities, by forcing a poem.  
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