reaction:
2 brothers i knew lived together for most of 30 years.. when the older one
moved into a home with his girlfriend, the younger brother killed himself..
and the older, feeling guilt, followed his example
I was preparing a breakfast:
I was preparing a breakfast of eggs for my husband and children..
suddenly I saw the skillet full of blood, beaks, feathers..
the eggs had been fertilized and were almost chicks..
It was the last time I was involved with them
Paculiar : It's funny how people perceive things in their own mind. This particular work was published several times received some accolades but yet through this list of my stuff there's not a single comment on it. I find that extremely interesting and challenging in some sort of a way! But I love all the comments I have received on other works!
reaction: i guess the fish i've seend on a hook don't have happy faces
but panicked ones gasping for breath...
you are more effective than i.. with your sense of humor
ima: I wonder if Ima Bovine has met Howard Lyman, the 4th generation
Montana cattle rancher who became vegan after promising God he would
if his bone cancer was healed
God heal your physical problems
Thank you for the reply. As: Thank you for the reply. As for the dwitching viewpoints, I think it only becomes confusing when one enters the third person mode from either the first or second. But to shuttle between first and second seems to me to be fully acceptible, and a shrewd poetic strategy which you have used to advantage in this poem.
As for never forcing it, I cannot imagine that you would ever insult your art, and your profound verbal abilities, by forcing a poem.