Guinivere and Lancelot; but: Guinivere and Lancelot; but weren't they adulterers, and came to a bad end? I understand that the rhyme scheme required the use of the names, in order to rhyme the fifth and sixth lines---but could this possibly cast a shadow over a happy poem?
Bladder full of blood: Don't mind me, better that you do, I'm simply pinning this page, for the best vampire poem I ever experienced! And that's putting my pride aside, because it reminded me of a masculine twist to this-perhaps with my tale "Cardamax"