Beautiful, endearing.
It: Beautiful, endearing.
It makes me think of the urge, one I know that many poets have felt, to be down on their older, "lesser" writings, and sometimes even disgard them. But, much like this drawing, even truly more primative writes of the poet were telling their own creation story ; )
Very much enjoyed this read and the reflection it brought about.
I applaud the coversational: I applaud the coversational tone with which this poem conveys its contents. And that final stanza---that brilliant, triumphant, and very profound final stanza---releases a tremendous, and highly encouraging, power.
Aw so sweet! Love is: Aw so sweet! Love is something you work for the harder you work the deeper it gets. Not everyone has the the constitution compassion or the fortitude to make it last. Glad you found a source of great blessing and I hope she knows how lucky she is to have someone like you who sees it. Lovely words to melt hearts, frostbite? I don't see it. Maybe lovebite?
I'm At Peace My Friend: I believe all creatures have a souls, Horses, Dogs and Cats ect.
"Search And Seizure"
My hands hurt, from doing the deed.
Rolling joints and smoking weed.
My head is light, my eyes are red.
The cops show up to search the crib.
They search the place from front and back.
The puppy lays on my black bag.
They praised the dog for what she found!
I had to turn the music down.
William J. Roney III
Copyright (C) 2019
The Dog is smart, she has a soul.
The ribbon was blue, not solid gold.
All creatures go to Heaven, that's my belief!
My paper is ready to receive!
And as always, a most welcome: And as always, a most welcome review that opens up tree-lined avenues to further expeditions into poetic expression. And onward in the journey of extrication from these all too easy 'cure alls.'A curious aside as well, 'panacea' was to be part of the title but chose against utlising that for a more accessible title. My gratitude dear PatriciaJJ.