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Crying out loud
cry a tear
cry a bucket
cry a river
cry a lake
what one should i cry
if someone i love so much
hates me?
i'd cry all tears, buckets, rivers, and lakes
until this vast planet we call earth is flooded.
and my ark will be thy soul
the one that is saved
the one that was cast out from all else
the one excluded
the one forgotten
the one hated
everyone will be gone except for my soul mate with whom we will start things over
with a new heaven
and earth
so that when we die
our two souls can unite as one
the world will have no hate
nor crime
the new earth will be of eternal bliss
the tree bearing the forbidden fruit
will be burned
then all will be right
and i will never cry again.
Awesome poem. I've read some of your others and they were good too...I'm not gonna critique them all, but they're all good. This one stood out to me though...great work! Keep writing. Don't let the shitty parts of life get ya down. There's always good somewhere... ~Joanna