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My Queen
Your smile is more beautiful than a summer sunset.
Your beauty renders me speechless, no matterhow you dress.
When I look into your eyes I cry tears of joy.
I love you so much, I will settle for being your little toy.
<3
Your desire is my command.
I will go through hell to be your man.
I can never do enough to please you.
I'll gladly give up everything for you.
<3
These words do not sufficiently describe you.
Pictures do not do justice to you.
You are truely a gift from above.
You're the only woman to hold my love.
:>)
Lovely
Lovepebbles}}}
I like it.
I like it. Doesn't quite seem like something a guy not on Disney channel would write but I like it. Keep going strong. It was very Bruno Marsish. You know I-would-catch-a-grenade-for-you type of thing. Anyway I think it's sweet writing a poem for her. Whoever her is. But I would suggest keeping the little heart break lines out very unmanly. Just a suggestion. I mean if you are a guy. I haven't read your profile so I dont know if you are a guy. Ranting I know, I am strange and mean and shouldn't comment on anything. Anyway your's in words,
DanBobthespiritualhobo.
Now that 'tis true devotion.
"Your desire is my command.
I will go through hell to be your man.
I can never do enough to please you.
I'll gladly give up everything for you."
Whew.
I think that I too would love nothing better than to hold onto a warm body than just some materialistic objects.
What a lucky Queen.
Great write.
=^.^=
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo