Love

Heal me before I self-destruct

In this horrid state of mind, your sincere affection I can’t get enough

Love is everything a person lets it be.

Save me from the annihilation of myself with the taste of ecstasy

Your relentless passion gives me the satisfaction to stay

A woman has their significant other on their mind in any kind of way

Love can be crafted in many methods - - appearing in the form of happiness of pain

When it’s done to mirage true sinful intentions, the situation can turn into a hurtful experience leading it to be in vain

 Why keep trying to give it your all if all the negatives remain the same?

Some takes things seriously while others play mind-games

There should be more thoughts than just lust when a person hear their lover’s name

Even with the right words and actions can the hearts of the unfaithful can be tamed

It is meant to make memories to be recaptured the moment two love-birds eyes links together

In their vision, there is nothing else missing than the wish for this last forever

Nothing in existence does; As much as love is painful, it can bring a person’s spirit up

Those who was once consumed by loneliness will have their soul encouraged

The union of two hopeful people endeavoring to make the relations work with all their power won’t be discouraged

Unless they allow the world’s evil and the devil work entwine and destruction their bond

If the love is true, not many things will break it aside from death from one receiving the harsh end of them being gone

Losing a love one is of the most devastating pains of all to face

It can be more of a suffering than one’s emotions can take?

 

 

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nightlight1220's picture

You have one very good thing

You have one very good thing on your side if you are writing this from a current experience, and that is that you are aware. Now you just have to stay aware, and pray for motivation to divert your attention away from your need for intimacy from someone who does not for some reason feel safe to be intimate with you on the level you need for a strong base in a relationship.. I f this is just a peom, it is written very well and a great shout out to those people who may have similar thoughts about a relationship they are in. There are people who associate intimacy with sex, and it is really anything but. It begins with intimacy of thought, and if people are placed in situations where others are not supportive or where they feel they are being nit-picked on a judged by others, then that will not change until they feel safe to share their feelings with whom they choose, and it may be very difficult for them to be sincere---for the simple reason, intimacy is meant to be shared in intimacy---!! 

 

A lot of your poem I really do not understand---"happiness in the form of pain"...I don't get that, unless you are speaking about 'difficulties' in relationships---those I think everyone has. 

 

"There should be more thoughts than just lust when a person hear their lover’s name" I have found this --(with men AND even some women alike)---to be a mind game to elicit just the response you have given here, and also an attempt to say without saying "I don't trust this person, place, situation, to express what I am truly feeling, so I will use lust to 'turn them off and leave me the hell alone"


Just my thoughts---but I truly wish you luck with whatever it is you are going through if you are distressed. ~many blessings~


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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

WordIdealist's picture

It's simply a poem

Poetry from thinking too deeply on the word of love and how it moves others. I wasn't sad when I first wrote it awhile back. But I do thank you for your kind words. :) ...I didn't get what you didn't understand. You was correct. Happiness in the form of pain comes from difficult situations in relationships and how sometimes a person will be treated badly if the relationship start to turn bad.


 

 
wantingthatrelease's picture

Hating love

I honestly couldn't relate anymore than that. Very sincere and well thought. (: