The winds of time
blow memories of you
through my mind
A sweeter love,i shall never know
as the winds of time gently blow
the smell of honeysuckle in the air
two young people in love without a care
Forever and always
your love shall be mine
if only in my mind
For I have touched your soul
and you have touched mine
and I will love you till the end of time
The essence of you shall always lay gently on my mind
two souls searching for solace
as we move through time
you have brought me from a boy to a man
and for that I will always be in your debt
and something I will never forget
but fate wasn't kind to you and me
our love could never be
so I will dream of you from time to time
and the essence of you will always be on my mind
Romeo romeo where art thou romeo
I`m in your heart and in your mind
where I will remain until the end of time...
Enjoyed your personalized
Enjoyed your personalized take on a timeless tragedy. Few things are as painful as what-might-have-been's and here you expressed it with sweeping emotion, a lovely voice and relatable honesty. A pleasure.
hey pat,thanks for your
hey pat,thanks for your lovely input
ron parrish
My pleasure.
My pleasure.
This is a very unique poem.
This is a very unique poem. Is this a dialogue between Romeo and Juliet? I thought at first it was spoken by Romeo, but the last stanza made me doubt that. I must be having one of my "old man" moments. For a long time, I have thought that Juliet was the wiser, or---if one prefers---shrewder, of the two. In spring of 1973, in High School freshman English, our teacher---following one of the crazy education trends of the early seventies---arranged for our class to do a reading aloud (not a full stage performance with memorization) of the play, which, of for us, was a brand new experience (both of the text and of the method). Part of the crazy trend was to reverse the gender roles---so that I selected to read the part of Juliet (and my chief rival in the class of 76, since kindergarten and right up to and beyond graduation day) was selected to read Romeo. All of us were expected to study, as homework, our characters' parts to be read the next day. I was amazed at how active, rather than passive, Juliet is as a chief character. She is not at a naive, although she pretends to be when it suits her purpose. I have not read nearly as much of Shakespeare as I should have, but comparing the amount I have read, I think Juliet (no, not Hamlet, not Macbeth, and not Miranda) is his greatest dramatic creation. Thank you for posting this poem, and for reminding me, through it, of my previous (and long ago!) experience with the ever fascinating Juliet.
J-Called
thank you for the visit,i
thank you for the visit,i read the book years ago but the poem is based on the myth,it`s always better than facts
ron parrish
Thanks for the clarification.
Thanks for the clarification.
J-Called
yeap
yeap
ron parrish