Misty Waters

 


 



from the misty waters,

of my mind,

i hear your words,

but i read them blind.

 

True meaning ,

of your mind,

i will never understand,

but ,i`m only a man .

 

Not a myth,

not a scholar ,

but locked here in my prison,

that i must conquer

 

some day

it will set me free

the universe will be mine,

my spirit will flee ...

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Revisiting this enchanting

Revisiting this enchanting reflection that accepts our limitations, but only as a temporary state until the spirit is free. Your thoughts exquisitely meld with an elegant voice and eternal hope. One of my favorites! Patricia 

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thank you pat your review 

thank you pat your review  makes it sound better


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Dreamy, triumphant and

Dreamy, triumphant and flowing, this work is the perfect remedy for my tired, earthbound spirit.  Enjoyed! 

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damn,i am way behind,thank

damn,i am way behind,thank you pat,i finally got it fixed


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The spirit will indeed be

The spirit will indeed be free someday :-) Sue.

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thank you sue,and you`re

thank you sue,and you`re right


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In a cage

In a cage we all are dear friend..... 


©bishu 

 

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but of course,where can we

but of course,where can we really go ? how free are we


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Lemme know

When the Universe is yours I might wanna go for a ride 


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we can swim , the misty

we can swim ,

the misty waters,

of my mind

 

the universe

will always be mine...ok let me hear the rest


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i will reserve you a

i will reserve you a seat,,thanks


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Writer. Encore!

Reserve two seats please - good to hear the scratchings of your pen, dude in the redshirtofliberatedprisoners. :D


 

 

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hows that hand doing

hows that hand doing


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