In this silly little pool

Silly little tides,
in a funny little pool,
I'm at my end,
Drowning to get to you.

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Here's a line... grab on and

Here's a line... grab on and hold tight. I'll try to pull you in. ;)


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WhatIAmOrWillBe's picture

Nice!

Makes for a much more playful ending for sure...  I like it.  

Thanks for the suggestion.  


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