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She is, remains...
adorned importance
not seen as she is felt.

She is, fragrance
perfumes of blues,
purples hues, enticing.
bottled to be sprayed
by a chosen few

She is, stored away
boxed up in opaque
she is, ashes
all shades of grey
time and distance...

She is,...
Fog At Daybreak.

by:jrfehlmann 12/2012

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I know, unfinished, and lacking... well, the... something.... but ran out of time. suggestions are helpful, or any thoughts are appreciated.

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Beautiful and haunting!

Beautiful and haunting! CheerSS


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