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COMING INTO LIGHT

that

still

depth.

Unveiling, before my hidden eyes...

Your?...

My?...

Mystical Dispensation?

I watch from a throne, One Hearts Pursuit, within.

My Iconoclast awakened!

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Speaks for itself.

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©19 December 2001 - 11:06pm — vjochum
21 February 2009 - 4:25pm — Afzal Shauq (not verified)
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sure whats coming into light is true...poem is good...impressive too... like your poetry..if you dont mine...because you dont do comments in detail... wish if I get your comments in detail... bets of luck

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — John Mazur (not verified)
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How are you using the words "Dispensation" and "Iconoclast"? MY understanding of what those words mean and the word form you have used completely confounds me.

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — Danielle Edwards (not verified)
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I like the way you wrote it, with those questioning words. Very goodm fairly short but still a keeper.

20 December 2001 - 11:06pm — hawksquaw99
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this is such a powerful poem.... I loved it... Renee'