4 5 minutes
and 29 seconds
I sat outstretched physically
mentally
I was curled tightly
as tight as a solid fist
raised to symbolize
black power
4 5:29
I struggled 2 remain
so together
I struggled 4 5:29
long seconds 2 keep from
flailing my chocolate arms and bean pole legs
in a wild rage
I remained still
but
my mind played the scene
4 me
4 5:29 I squeezed
my eyes tight
I wanted 2 scream
2 kick out the windshield
to pound out the passenger side window
I wanted 2 scream bloody murder
I wanted 2 curse
I wanted 2 spit
I wanted 2 become
2 metamorphosis
like David Banner
4 5:29
I felt murderous
as I listened
for 5:29 having no choice
2 your BULLSHIT
4 5:29
I fashioned rude reactive
balls of spit that I
was hurling your way
words that combined
sarcasm with irony
and similes with metaphors
let me spit
let me flow
let me vent
for 5 minutes
and
twenty-nine seconds
I did nothing
but
wish that I was deaf
and could sign
all these thoughts
and
U unsuspectingly stupid and oblivious
wouldn't know shit
for 5:29
I fought against myself
and sat
perfectly still
2 hear your voice
annoy me
hearing your words
oh the things you said
2 her
angered me
I know U were trying 2
piss me off
cuz all that you spoke
all those words
are
YOUR LIES
love the tone
love the technique
love the poem.
Tone - we are listening to your internal dialouge and you have drawn us into the poem like the speaker in the phone conversation has drawn you into his/hers.
Technique - the mix of alpha-numeric characters is refreshing.
This poem was a delight to read.