As I stand dripping wet
naked to the world in my
pure as snow, white, waist length plastic jacket
with my shiny blue knee length zipper front
sexy prostitute boots
knocking at your door
cherry lollipop wet w/ anticipation
rolling around on my tongue, the words already
trying to drip from my lips,
salivating words waiting,
I had to slurp up my prose, and try
to walk away with my head held high
U said "come", I came
knocked
U never answered
U were there
I know w/someone else
U made me feel invisible
You make my writing feel sloppy.
Your technique, your lines,
your voice all tight. No word
or line out of place.
WoW - you are a piece of wonder.