Control

There is power in my giving up control.
Knowing that I will find out what I want, what I need.
To know you will push me, bend me, pull me, control me.
That you will give me what I want, what I did not know I needed.

The loss of power, of control, but knowing I will be held up.
Knowing I am safe, that you will never let me fall,
Feeling you even when I can't see you,
Hearing you when I can't speak.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

To my beautiful I.L

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annasmith7813's picture

I love the beginning of it. I

I love the beginning of it. I can relate to the power that losing control gives you and I think you described it perfectly :)

UnpurePleasures's picture

Thank you for the good

Thank you for the good feed-back. And thank you for reading! :)

Thankful,
UnpurePleasures


Her hand in mine reminds me that I am human, I am loved, I will always be. Because sometimes... sometimes I forget. I get lost in the darkness of my mind. But she will hold my hand and I can see again. She isn't a light in the dark, she is THE light. ~BC~

Mardigan's picture

Nice. 

Nice. 

UnpurePleasures's picture

Thank-you. For commenting and

Thank-you. For commenting and for your praise.

Thank you,
UnpurePleasures


Her hand in mine reminds me that I am human, I am loved, I will always be. Because sometimes... sometimes I forget. I get lost in the darkness of my mind. But she will hold my hand and I can see again. She isn't a light in the dark, she is THE light. ~BC~

Jesster's picture

I agree... nice.

I agree... nice.


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UnpurePleasures's picture

Thank you very much. Thank

Thank you very much.

Thank you,
UnpurePleasures


Her hand in mine reminds me that I am human, I am loved, I will always be. Because sometimes... sometimes I forget. I get lost in the darkness of my mind. But she will hold my hand and I can see again. She isn't a light in the dark, she is THE light. ~BC~