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Pain
This ripping in my head
this peicering pain I feel
brought about from kindness
why do I need pain to give kindness?
It splits inside my head
and courses down my spine
this awful pain
This ripping in my head
this peicering pain I feel
brought about from kindness
why do I need pain to give kindness?
It splits inside my head
and courses down my spine
this awful pain
Tyler,
Another amazing poem. I am getting to know you through your poetry. All of your emotions pour through, in the words. I feel your pain and your sorrow and your aloneness. That is really good. Not many writers can do it, like you can. Would you please critique some of my poetry? I would really really appreciate it. Thank you!