As you lie on your deathbed
I hardly know what to say.
There's so much to tell
But I need more than just today.
It's hard to find
Just where to begin.
There's so many places
That we haven't yet been.
I try to sputter out
Exactly what I feel
But I still don't believe it
The situation is so unreal.
I don't want you to go
No, not just yet.
There's so much in life
That I just don't get.
I need your advice
And I still need your help.
It's always so precise
No one else's comes close.
But I see you're slipping away
So I close my eyes tight
And think back to another day
When the future was still bright.
thats really pretty
I love this poem so much. It's one of the best I've seen recently, well done! I love the ending, the last stanza, it's a perfect way to end a poem. This literally made me go goosebumpy it's so emotion provoking. Very, very good.