There's this one little girl
And she sits in her room.
Nobody loves her-
She's destined to doom.
Her life is bland
Her walls are bare
And her eyes always have
That cold hard stare.
The floor is creaky
The lights are flickering
And if you listen closely,
You can hear her parents snickering.
She tried at school
She tried at home
Yet she still roamed around
Completely unknown.
If somebody would notice,
If somebody would care,
Then maybe at night
She wouldn't have to say a prayer.
Because all of her life
She's felt unloved.
Every single day
She gets pushed and shoved.
So, late one night,
She laid down on the floor
And suddenly it ended
Behind her closed and locked door.
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This poem really moved me.. i like it.. it realtes to something i would read also.
Keep them coming!
Wow - You've got some really dark poems here, but this one really stuck out ... I was really moved ...
Reuben