This black winter rose, died long ago
She's weak and she's withered, all covered in snow
Once she was red in her beauty and glory
Her now wilted petals can tell her long story.
The sun was so fond of her delicate face
And the wind sang a song of her delightful grace
The moon and the stars would dance for her pleasure
And each little child beheld her a treasure.
But winter would come and this she knew well
The bleak and the cold, her own icy hell
She drank the last sunlight, and took a last breath
The following white morning, her wintery death...
Wow, thats a really beautiful piece!! I really enjoyed reading it! Keep it up!
very beautiful nice work keep it up
*tuesday Mcgown
Wow! This is a great poem! It flows nicely and seemingly effortlessly. It's really beautiful.
I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!! It was so well written. I love the way you expressed this piece. Very moving.