Through the darkness
Into the light
Silence embrace
Depression fight
Darkness I’ll use
Myself to find
The false destroy,
Onto truth bind.
I’ve gone through flames,
Endured heartache,
In this darkness
My time will take
Like a phoenix
I’ll rise again
Come out stronger
After the pain
ok this sounds like a spell LOL sorry i had to say that it starts off so strong! "Through the darkness Into the light Silence embrace Depression fight" this almost sounds like either 1) suicide or 2)the fight between wanting to die and wanting to live and it may be for a course at school but i for one think it is great, it hits ya strongly and is better then some of the stuff u have done that was not for school. what gr. did ya get on this?
Much Love
Ashley
It isn't that bad for a school poem :) if you think it can be better then make a better virsion that isn't for school.. :) love ya always Vicki