Darkness

Through the darkness

Into the light

Silence embrace

Depression fight



Darkness I’ll use

Myself to find

The false destroy,

Onto truth bind.



I’ve gone through flames,

Endured heartache,

In this darkness

My time will take



Like a phoenix

I’ll rise again

Come out stronger

After the pain

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Again, for a course at school, so it had to fit certain things, so it's not as good as it could have been.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

ok this sounds like a spell LOL sorry i had to say that it starts off so strong! "Through the darkness Into the light Silence embrace Depression fight" this almost sounds like either 1) suicide or 2)the fight between wanting to die and wanting to live and it may be for a course at school but i for one think it is great, it hits ya strongly and is better then some of the stuff u have done that was not for school. what gr. did ya get on this?


Much Love

Ashley

Vicki D's picture

It isn't that bad for a school poem :) if you think it can be better then make a better virsion that isn't for school.. :) love ya always Vicki