In a dream,
someone handed
me a blue crystal
rosary
and a red crystal
rosary
2 of the 3 colors
of the American flag
and each religion
has its own cells
within the CIA..
there is the Mormon
cell.. Mormons
had for a while
the highest percentage
in the CIA..
there is the Catholic
cell.. which included
Colby before his murder
.. there is the Likud
cells..
the Irish Catholic cell
and so on
God give miracles
to all beings
.. now
as God removes
the violent from the power
to harm others
I really shouldn't even give your comment on my poem the time of day, but self-righteous bigots get my dander up. In the first place, I doubt that you are anything but a trouble maker despite your eloquent and militant stand to the contrary. People like you hide a mountain of hate and envy behind a screen of "Thou shalts" that have nothing to do with God. Please refrain from visiting my poetry again. I have read enough of yours to know that I don't like you and your slyly disguised anti-Americanism. I personally think that you are probably one of the very people who would shelter those who attacked our nation at the WTC. At any rate, you wouldn't know a decent poem if it presented itself to you inked in gold and on thousand year old parchment. You have a really warped idea of what critiques are for. You have animosity at the core of all your pretty words, but you haven't fooled me at all.
I don't care for your negative comments about my country nor your arrogant and holier-than-thou attitude. Anyone can quote the Bible, Torah, etc. Your actions speak from your heart and it isn't a pretty sight.
Jessica onelilartist