My Faultless Hours



There’s moments in twilight

Where delightful exuberance soothes.

Before the dawn,

My existence, roused.


Laying with clouds of plenty;

Where sublime pleasure plays.

Wishing this half-light will linger,

And stay throughout the day.


Silent are the birds,

And dancing are the trees.

These desolate hours;

Bringing me to my knees.


The stunning glow surrounds;

Shooting like stars overhead.

I’d follow this twilight,

To anywhere it lead.



Author's Notes/Comments: 

Where darkness turns to light, I'm awakened to a level of pure understanding. Oh, my twilight hours.

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GOHIL48's picture

this is the kind of poem I

this is the kind of poem I always wanted to write.. but I just can't.. this is beautiful:)

truthintragedies's picture

My heart is smiling

You can do anything. Never sell yourself short. I've read a few of your poems and songs and they are nothing but beauitful. Your words flow magically and you tend to have this darkness that attracts my soul. I can't wait to have a little more time so I can read more of your work. Thank you for the comment and for taking the time to read. It's taken me a long time to write differently, I never use to  be able to write about stuff like this. I'm usually comfortable in my darkness. I'll stop rambling, but thanks again. :)

**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**

GOHIL48's picture

That's so sweet of you.. and

That's so sweet of you.. and thanks a lot! and everything I have written, it's all because of all the inspiration I got from poets like you here:)