I can envision me in another world
Trying to escape from you
Your tight grip around my creativity
Makes me stay here even longer
Each day I try to impress you with words
I feel as if I fail if i let you down
I try my hardest
Showing you what I can do
A little encouragement would help along the way
Each passing second I sit in awe
At your constructive criticism
Each moment I yearn to hear your advice
You are my teacher almost like a friend
Who will help me when I need it
Who will be there to make sure
I WILL amount to something
We
all have a mentor, or a person who inspires...somebody who we respect, and whose criticism we value ...
This is a good summary of how one feels when not wanting to disappoint the one who so inspires..
Well Done