Your Pleasure

Your pleasure is expensive...

I think its out of my range.



Your plesure is expensive...

it's over priced these days.



Your pleasure is expensive...

it's always in demand!

I think this hedonism is getting out of hand.



Your pleasure is expensive...

Just look at what it cost.

My friendship...or was that really a loss?



Your pleasure is expensive...

and mine was practically free.

I guess I valued you, more than you valued me...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

What do you value?

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saiom's picture

Geneva, an ironic poem with a powerful punch

and your picture.. of the woman in the looking glass
.. has many meanings as well



 

 

phil_carcione's picture

I liked this one.

People always look elsewhere and have trouble seeing was is close at hand.

I guess it's "the grass is always greener" syndrome.

Keep the faith.

phil-carcione@attbi.com