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Exponential Growth
One, day not so long ago...
they grew too distant.
Then there were three.
Forever they were changed.
One, day not so long ago...
they grew too distant.
Then there were three.
Forever they were changed.
I like the growth theme. Realizing that we will survive after things do work the way we dreamed they would is important to the healing process. Your poem is short, but i read it at least 14 times trying to figure out the meaning of "three". Did you mean that this was your 3rd such loss? Or are there 3 of something else, like 3 people involved? Good work.
This is a familiar feeling :) The great thing is, that you show the growth in the poem, even though using very few words. Very gracefully, I might add. Not regretful, but showing that you have moved on, and taken something positive with you from that experience. I think that is something everyone can learn from.