The Autumn Season

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Season Poems

As I look up at the sky,
little leaves drift on by.
The air is filled with a chill,
that no amount of heat can fill.
The leaves are changing color,
in a season like no other.
The wind blows around freely,
during the autumn season that comes yearly.
A scent like no other,
a scent that can't be compared to another.
People seem to feel better,
being nicer, like a love letter.
Air conditioners get turned off,
since the air is comfortable enough.
People look up from their phones,
and with people all around, they see they're not alone.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this poem to talk about the Autumn Season! Please let me know what you think!

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SSmoothie's picture

Lovely! I can feel that lovely mood break across

The room! Yes too many people are plugged into THIER devices... I for one am guilty! ;) cheers SS nice read!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Lol, I am too! Thanks!

Lol, I am too! Thanks!


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Adam아담's picture

... um?

I was in a little bit of shock... this poem is just bursting with so much color, calm beauty, and heartaching yearnings on childhood. I wish I could say that better than I did.


Cheers,
Adam_San

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So, you liked it? Thanks!

So, you liked it? Thanks!


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Adam아담's picture

In my mind, best poem you've

In my mind, best poem you've ever written.


Cheers,
Adam_San

thisisme789's picture

AWw!! Thanks! Now i must look

AWw!! Thanks! Now i must look very strange, sitting in the corner on the computer, grinning like a weirdo!


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Adam아담's picture

lol... know whatcha mean

lol... know whatcha mean


Cheers,
Adam_San

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you do? =)

you do?
=)


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Adam아담's picture

Oh sure! I remember some

Oh sure! I remember some girl I liked saying something, and then my mom asking why I grinned. Or, a friend making a joke. It happens. ;)


Cheers,
Adam_San

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Lol, And you're left to try

Lol, And you're left to try and figure out what to tell them XD


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Adam아담's picture

"I um, like this girl, and

"Well mom, I um, like this girl, and she was saying how every time she hears someone say 'Bob's your uncle' she thinks about her uncle Bob who..."

Yeah... could make for a bit of explanation
(btw, I made up that example if you are wondering)


Cheers,
Adam_San

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Lol, wow. Lovely!

Lol, wow. Lovely!


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