I'm Frantic

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I'm frantic!
Repeating my actions,
over and over again.

I'm frantic!
I'm working hard
to get it to work.

I'm frantic!
But my efforts are
going out in vain.

I'm frantic!
But nothing is happening,
and I don't know why.

I'm frantic!
Why aren't the things
I am doing, doing anything?

I'm frantic!
I'm also probably
freaking those around me out.

I'm frantic!
Working and working,
but nothing is happening.

I'm frantic!
Frantically repeating myself.
Eventually, I know it will work!

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SSmoothie's picture

Whoah!

This one has an element of OCD or perfectionism! I hope it's the latter ;) this was fast paced and I really enjoyed the rhythm! Nice one! Thanks SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

thisisme789's picture

Thanks girl! lol. I'm glad

Thanks girl! lol. I'm glad that you like it!


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