Dear friend
what should i say
yes. i'm hurt
i don't understand how it all started
i thought you didnt like him
You'd tell me how you couldn't trust him
how he'd hurt your feelings
how can it be you are his?
and mainly him who mostly everyone including you knew
knew how much i wanted and liked him
You were with someone elses' and you gave up on him
and told him it was the distance
he atleast deserved to know the truth
the one that hurts the most
if you can't do that its because you are unsure
tell you what i dont care that you're his
though that's just what i tell myself
what hurts me the most
is knowing that eventhough you knew
you would actually accept
i'll be here when you need me
but don't expect me to help or be there when he's involved
this poem is realistic and rich poem with imaginary effects... like it very much and I went through few of your more poems and found interesting too... means you are agood poetess with multiple new ideas.. hope you add more to your site to enjoy... I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books published and 7th is on the way to be in market soon... love peace wishers... and hope you like my poetry and lt me know if tha is touching your heart too or i am just writing..here I wish to share my famous say with you to mak you sure about my peace aims... ( a friend smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq ) hope you be in touch...