In younger days
I was inclined to believe nothing.
Being a child,
I thought in childlike patterns,
Simple, realistic.
Surely there was nothing happening
Over my head
That was unexplainable
Or held genuine importance for me.
Of course, I went with the family
To that building on the edge of town
And listened half-heartedly
To the man who preached
Vitriolic forgiveness.
He was sweaty, red-faced,
Boisterously vehement.
I used to wonder
Why he seemed so angry
When he spoke of
What supposedly made him happy.
Who could speak so frighteningly
When they had genuine belief?
I was affected…
My conclusion:
The shouting was not merely for telling…
It was to convince
Not his audience,
But himself.
This, & a child's salvation, says so much in so few words! i really appreciate the way you make it almost as if you were still looking through the child's eyes you once were...
...you have a wonderful way of getting to the heart of the matter, & I look forward to reading more of your work!
~Anastazia~