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a lonely tear
A lonely tear runs to her chin,
when she thinks about what has been.
she rembers the night oh so well,
when the man she loved put her through hell.
she called him up thinking he was alone,
her breth was gone when a girl answered the phone.
she hung it up and began to cry,
she felt like she wanted to die.
thoughts of suaside ran through her head,
all the thoughts of being dead.
she walked up the stairs mouth was triffeled,
she walked to her daddys riffel.
she grabed the gun fast as can,
no one thought she would kill her self over a man.
she pulled the trigger, click click boom,
blood covered the whole room.
neibors ran in such a fright,
call 911 one said at the sight.
she missed her heart by a inch or more,
thats what the docter said when her dad walked through the door.
so she gonna live he asked in a fright,
im nto sure but theres a chance she might.
the first day back she stands in front of the mirror looking at her face she see the tear, rembering the night when the tears hit her chin, then rembering what has been.
wow thats really good
This i would have to say is one of my favorite poems that you wrote. It is very emotional and i know how much this poem means to you being that you have read it to me like 3 times now..
OH MY GOSH!!! Your poems are so awesome. This one made me cry. I love your style of writing. It's amazing how you can put your feelings into writing like this. I admire you so much for it!!! This is the first one i have read so far, but I'm sure that if i wrote a comment on any other one it would be very similar becuase there isn't anythign of your's that i've read and haven't liked.
Luv ya, ME
i really, really like this poem. it's really really good and expresses so much. it has touched me in ways that i can't even really explain.
once again, really really good poem and never stop writing.