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Love I don't know where you came from,
But I'm so glad you're here.
I was looking for happiness so far away,
And it seems all the while it was here.
You make me feel desired,
More than I've ever felt before.
I hope that I don't make an ass outta myself,
And fall down to the floor.
I do that a lot,
When I find someone I like,
I get all nervous around them,
Like a kid learning to ride a bike.
I hope my parents like you,
But I'm confident they won't,
We have the choice to date one another,
They don't.
I am no pro, but you might try changing the "here" in the 4th line to "near". On the message, "no one will ever be good enough for our little girl" is a global parental mentality. If they were, the next thing you know "we would be grandparents and that would mean we are old." You will only understand this fact of life after your children are grown. lol.
Hugs and Peace
HK