I checked in a hotel
got me a room
but no matter where i go
heartache followed and so did you
Some one out there knows how It feels
yet I know that its real
I grabbed my bag, my wallet and phone
tonight I drink all alone
I ordered a vodka a whiskey or two
I dialed your numbers hoping its you
we talked abit
you said dont drink
i slowly sipped
i needed to think
your words echoed as i drank
but you didnt know tears sank
I wiped them away
i began to talk
blurred i know..
so i started to walk
my glass laid empty
but my tears were full
I closed my phone and sat there still
wondering if I should refill
here in the bar
patrons galore
guys all drunk
flirting with whores
Everyone has a heartache to tell
but all they have here
is booze to sell
I picked up my glass to order a beer
and as he took it
I saw my tears
I ordered more and sat in the dark
no one noticed in the garden bar park
I drank my vodka my whiskey and beer
but my glass kept filling with my tears
I checked my watch
12-01 is the time
not once he said. "Happy Valentines"
nothing said... he didnt care
so i ordered me another beer
I drank my vodka my whiskey too
And the last thing I remembered
were my tears and you
Abz J (dated 17th Feb 2007)
Love it
I think we all have sat here drinking but refilling with tears :) great job...
irockpoker
That's really powerful! I
That's really powerful! I felt sad for the girl, and wanted to be able to find her and tell her that it's okay. Great write!
<3
That girl came through that
That girl came through that ok tho it took awhile - in the end I walked away I guess the alcohol that valentine night influenced my decision. thanks for the comment
gailjames
I'm glad that you're okay.
I'm glad that you're okay. And, no problem!
<3
very powerful
an intense view of despair from the "bottom" of an empty glass
these line said it all
my glass laid empty
but my tears were full
keep writing
peace
Dylan
"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"
Dylan Eliot