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On the Line
Hello.....
Are you there?
Do you care?
Oh man,
on the end of this line,
What is it
that we share?
Ask you,
Do I dare.
I think not!
I feel not!
For you are not even there.
Hello.....
Are you there?
Do you care?
Oh man,
on the end of this line,
What is it
that we share?
Ask you,
Do I dare.
I think not!
I feel not!
For you are not even there.
Tanya, Yes...I like this one. Same feelings here to. In my case...I showed him the poem, and you know what? He wasnt half as suprised as I thought he would be. His concern was that I hadnt talked to him about feeling bad. I understand how its easier to put it on paper.....but one of these days.....just tell him. You will know when Great poem
Tanya, Glad that you let me know about the new ones.... this one is really very deep if you think about it....like so many relationships these days... we tent to wonder Are you there? Do you care? What is it that we share? I enjoyed reading this so much.... makes you stop and think.... thank you Renee'
I was reading a few of your poems. You're quite a writer. I thought this one was especially cute.